Great Job on your poem!! You did a great job at narrating the poem in first person point of view. I just think you need a little bit more figurative language. It's a little bit hard to read the words that are in the middle. I was a bit confused at the end, but then I was able to figure out what happened.
Great Job on your poem!! You did a great job at narrating the poem in first person point of view. I just think you need a little bit more figurative language. It's a little bit hard to read the words that are in the middle. I was a bit confused at the end, but then I was able to figure out what happened.
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