Saturday, February 28, 2015

"Set me free" written by Justin Ramirez

My whole entire life I have been caged.
Wont someone save me?
I long to be free and soar high.
Will you still love me throughout  the night?
All of my thoughts and words going through my head.
I want to leave and to be free for the rest of my days and soar high.
I will always be with you.
Even when I am far away from you.
Let me go or let me flee,
For i've been longing for you to go and set me free.
Can you please forgive me?
Even though I have done so much harm.
To you and society I am just like a porcelain doll.
Fragile, and breakable I still stand.
Waiting for the moment to die again.
Twisting and turning like a merry go round.
And I am just here stuck waiting for my chance to one day be set free.
Can you save me?
I am tired of all this agony so now I sit think.
I also wait until I finally get the chance to fly free, and to leave, and to finally flee.

1 comment:

  1. This is a really great poem. I really liked how you added a lot similes. Great blog!

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