Very well put together butterfly! I like how you showed how dirty it was by putting flies around the people. I also like how you showed fire to represent how the camp was like hell. I als thought it was cool that your background was striped blue and white because of the pajamas worn in the camp. The only recommendation I have is putting the poem so I can see where your ideas are coming from. Otherwise I was really interested in your butterfly, great job.
You did a good job at explaining all the parts of your butterfly. I like how you drew the help in an ombre effect to show how the children wanted help but could not get any. I thought it was a good idea how you included fire to represent how it was like hell. I also thought you did a good job by drawing blue and white stripes to represent the pajamas that were worn.
Your butterfly is really well explained, in my opinion. One thing that I really liked was the ombré effect because it was a really creative way to express what's the people in the Terezin camps were living through. It was also a good idea that you put the children sitting on top of the terrible things because it is looks like you took time to think to do that. Although, a couple of things that I would suggest would be to add the link to your poem and add your MLA citation in order to have the fourteen tags required. Otherwise, good job.
Great job Justin! I thought it was very intriguing to have your background as the striped 'pajamas.' I also thought it was a good idea to have flies flying around the stick figure so it could show that the persons weren't hygiene professionals. Along with James, I think your idea of having the flames show the camp as a living hell was a good idea. You could tell you put a lot of hardwork into your butterfly by the children sitting ontop of the flames and the help being expressed in the ombré effect. Also, you did not have fourteen tags, but you were close. Great job to include your poem as James suggested.
I think you did an amazing job Justin! I really like how you put your poem so people could understand your butterfly even more. For such a short poem you really went into detail and really analyzed it. Like everyone keeps saying, this is very well put together. I agree with Mia, this poem does indeed remind me of the Boy in the Striped Pajamas. Great job Justin!
The visual design of your butterfly is very intersting as you made the background the pajamas that the Jews had to wear. The thinglinks that you have showed me that you have a understanding of the poem and you were able to interpret what happened with the poem. One of the problems with you Thinglinks is that I feel as though some of the Thinglinks are not as long as they should be, but they are still at a reasonable length. By adding the poem you further the reader ability to understand what you are talking about.
Great job Justin! Somethings I liked a lot about your butterfly was how literal you made our butterfly. I found it really cool that you basically put everything in the poem on your butterfly. Another thing I found really cool was how you related your poem to the popular novel 'The Boy In The Striped Pajamas' and colored the background to resemble the pajamas the Jews had to wear during the war. One thing I did think could use some improvement is the amount of writing and quality of writing in the Thinkglinks. Besides that you did a great job.
You did a really great job Justin, very artistic. It thought the attention to detail was also really good because it took me a little while to see and find out what the stripes meant good job, I really can't find anything wrong with it.
Very well put together butterfly! I like how you showed how dirty it was by putting flies around the people. I also like how you showed fire to represent how the camp was like hell. I als thought it was cool that your background was striped blue and white because of the pajamas worn in the camp. The only recommendation I have is putting the poem so I can see where your ideas are coming from. Otherwise I was really interested in your butterfly, great job.
ReplyDeleteYou did a good job at explaining all the parts of your butterfly. I like how you drew the help in an ombre effect to show how the children wanted help but could not get any. I thought it was a good idea how you included fire to represent how it was like hell. I also thought you did a good job by drawing blue and white stripes to represent the pajamas that were worn.
ReplyDeleteYour butterfly is really well explained, in my opinion. One thing that I really liked was the ombré effect because it was a really creative way to express what's the people in the Terezin camps were living through. It was also a good idea that you put the children sitting on top of the terrible things because it is looks like you took time to think to do that. Although, a couple of things that I would suggest would be to add the link to your poem and add your MLA citation in order to have the fourteen tags required. Otherwise, good job.
ReplyDeleteGreat job Justin! I thought it was very intriguing to have your background as the striped 'pajamas.' I also thought it was a good idea to have flies flying around the stick figure so it could show that the persons weren't hygiene professionals. Along with James, I think your idea of having the flames show the camp as a living hell was a good idea. You could tell you put a lot of hardwork into your butterfly by the children sitting ontop of the flames and the help being expressed in the ombré effect. Also, you did not have fourteen tags, but you were close. Great job to include your poem as James suggested.
ReplyDeleteI think you did an amazing job Justin! I really like how you put your poem so people could understand your butterfly even more. For such a short poem you really went into detail and really analyzed it. Like everyone keeps saying, this is very well put together. I agree with Mia, this poem does indeed remind me of the Boy in the Striped Pajamas. Great job Justin!
ReplyDeleteThe visual design of your butterfly is very intersting as you made the background the pajamas that the Jews had to wear. The thinglinks that you have showed me that you have a understanding of the poem and you were able to interpret what happened with the poem. One of the problems with you Thinglinks is that I feel as though some of the Thinglinks are not as long as they should be, but they are still at a reasonable length. By adding the poem you further the reader ability to understand what you are talking about.
ReplyDeleteGreat job Justin! Somethings I liked a lot about your butterfly was how literal you made our butterfly. I found it really cool that you basically put everything in the poem on your butterfly. Another thing I found really cool was how you related your poem to the popular novel 'The Boy In The Striped Pajamas' and colored the background to resemble the pajamas the Jews had to wear during the war. One thing I did think could use some improvement is the amount of writing and quality of writing in the Thinkglinks. Besides that you did a great job.
ReplyDeleteYou did a really great job Justin, very artistic. It thought the attention to detail was also really good because it took me a little while to see and find out what the stripes meant good job, I really can't find anything wrong with it.
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